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minus-squareTheTechnician27@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up33arrow-down10·8 months agoI feel like this comic would be better served by ending at the fourth panel because the joke goes on for way too long.
minus-squarephotonic_sorcerer@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up52·8 months agoNah, the murder of the younglings is necessary for the emotional knife twist
minus-squareNicht BurningTurtle@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up23·8 months agoTho I would appreciate the lightsaber to be blue, to increase the authenticity.
minus-squarelime_red@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up13arrow-down2·8 months agoLast place comics’ thing is taking the joke way too long. It works!
minus-squarepyre@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up8·8 months agoI was gonna say this is at least 4 panels too long. either cut it there or make insanely long and get more and more absurd until panel 40.
minus-squareKlear@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·8 months agoOr, hear me out, cut the first four panels.
minus-squareTheTechnician27@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5·8 months agoI don’t get why people are saying you need six panels when this clearly shows that it works and works well.
minus-squareMrScottyTay@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·8 months ago1,2,5,8 is all that is needed to make it a better four panel Or you can do 2,3,5,8
minus-squareqarbone@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·8 months agoNah, four total panels isn’t enough. You just need to take out panels 4 and 6.
I feel like this comic would be better served by ending at the fourth panel because the joke goes on for way too long.
Nah, the murder of the younglings is necessary for the emotional knife twist
Tho I would appreciate the lightsaber to be blue, to increase the authenticity.
Last place comics’ thing is taking the joke way too long. It works!
I was gonna say this is at least 4 panels too long. either cut it there or make insanely long and get more and more absurd until panel 40.
Or, hear me out, cut the first four panels.
For comparison:
I don’t get why people are saying you need six panels when this clearly shows that it works and works well.
1,2,5,8 is all that is needed to make it a better four panel
Or you can do 2,3,5,8
Nah, four total panels isn’t enough.
You just need to take out panels 4 and 6.