good edit, also if you use numerals for numbers (12) dont change to word numbers (eight) inmediately after! also; i want to see the footage of the rescue copter clinging to the paddle board :(
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there are lots of different shitty events happening, with different ideas/ways of "standing up"... not sure we should be gatekeeping which ones are 'good enough' nor is there value in comparing. ending with "trust me" is a pretty insincere way to finish your observation and dilutes your authenticity.