First of all, this is an incredible shot! Second, I think your edit is solid. I am posting my edit of your pic to show you my interpretation of what I would post. I'm not implying that I somehow corrected your work, rather went with my gut for what looks good to me.
The biggest change is the crop and I chose it because I wanted to highlight the fine textures captured and make sure they're viewable even on small phone screens.
I pumped contrast and saturation to my liking. I pushed blacks up and whites down to make sure I wasn't clipping. In doing so, I stared seeing a lot of color noise so corrected that. There was also chromatic abberation/fringing on the wings, which I removed.
I also added sharpening. And a slight vignette to focus eyes to the center.
Lightroom settings (easily reproducible in Darktable):
Exposure -.20 f
Highlights -34
Shadows -18
Whites -4
Blacks +41
Temp -4/100 (towards cool)
Tint -3/100 (towards green)
Vibrance +27
Saturation +37
Tonal Contrast
Texture +10 (fine)
Clarity +15 (mid)
Dehaze +30 (coarse)
Sharpening +33
Color Noise Reduction +32
Vignette -29
Removed Chromatic Aberration
Proud