Lee Duna@lemmy.nz to Technology@lemmy.worldEnglish · 2 years agoRevealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade agowww.theguardian.comexternal-linkmessage-square55linkfedilinkarrow-up1542arrow-down114cross-posted to: technology@lemmy.world
arrow-up1528arrow-down1external-linkRevealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade agowww.theguardian.comLee Duna@lemmy.nz to Technology@lemmy.worldEnglish · 2 years agomessage-square55linkfedilinkcross-posted to: technology@lemmy.world
minus-squarejust_another_person@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3arrow-down10·2 years agoJust a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections. Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
minus-squareKecessa@sh.itjust.worksdeleted by creatorlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up7arrow-down1·2 years agoIt’s already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I’m making.
minus-squarejust_another_person@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1arrow-down4·2 years agoCertainly is after your edits. Thanks.
minus-squareKecessa@sh.itjust.worksdeleted by creatorlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·2 years ago… I didn’t split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go… Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added “proportionally”
Just a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections.
Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
It’s already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I’m making.
Certainly is after your edits. Thanks.
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I didn’t split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go…
Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added “proportionally”