[MAN 2]: Heh, sometimes that’s just the way the cookie crumbles amigo…
MAN 2 cocks gun, smokes entire cigarette
[MAN 2]: and sometimes the cookie crumbles you… …
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Pretty good, I’ve made a few adjustments though, tell me what you think:
[COOKIE MONSTER]: Heh, sometimes that just way cookie crumbles amigo…
COOKIE MONSTER cocks gun, smokes entire cigarette by mashing it in his flapping jaws
[COOKIE MONSTER]: and sometimes cookie crumbles you…
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You would not be able to see the cigarette through his lip fur. This will be one unbroken facial closeup like a spaghetti western.
What sort of audience are you targeting? Smoking a cigarette could get you an R rating in the US
There are so many people out there who like me watched the classic antihero films of the 1960s-80s and dreamed of a scene where the villain would keep smoking their cigarette. Not one puff, not holding it. The full thing.
That makes sense. It’s a large audience and they’ll watch it regardless of rating
Important question, what kind of cookie?
Metaphorical. Life cookie. Death cookie. Somewhere in betwixt.
There’s not even a real cookie‽
He might eat a cookie as he smokes the cigarette as a visual metaphor for shooting the man in the head.
