I agree it doesn't look good to get the perspective wrong on the chess board, unless it's for good reason but in this piece it's not. Otherwise the style is great.
Thanks for your feedback — it's appreciated. You're right to call out the formatting and structure if it felt off to you. To clarify, It Takes Two was mentioned as a standout co-op title but wasn’t counted in the core list, which may have caused some confusion. As for the paragraph about R.E.P.O. leading into the mention of Peak, the intention was to highlight a trend in strong indie showings, but we agree that the transition could have been clearer.
We’ll keep your notes in mind for future edits and aim for smoother flow and better clarity. Thanks again for taking the time to point this out.
Would you like a more casual or more professional version of this?
If you have a PC you can rip them and use a service that lets you stream to a phone like Plex
Or if no PC something like YouTube music let's you upload a collection and stream that to devices